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sensational
very well writen and sexy all the way through loved this story. "jakk"
Very erotic
I love older men, younger women stories, I find old men stimulating in more ways than one and would love more stories along these lines.
jcex
as i am an older gentelman, i loved the entire story line. the age difference for me to my wife is not quite the same as your story, but i could not help but return to the past myself.
Tender, Erotic Tale
A well written story that's bound to stir the feelings of many. You captured the inner feelings and fears very well and Katie's ultimate seductive sequence was well done. I only wished you had let there be a few more episodes, but you handled the passage of time and his ultimate demise beautifully.
Excellent!
Need I mention I love your work? I doubt it! :) Wonderful work and you continue to improve.
A Beautiful Story
This is a beautiful story that is beautifully told. I look forward eagerly to reading more of your work.
I am a cynical old pervert but I was touched by this story.
Your flow of words during the love acts caused my romantic side to come out (I try to keep it caged). What a wonderful story, thank you so much for writing.
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