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Valentine's Day Present

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/16/04

Absolutely Awesome!!! 10+++++

I loved this! What a sexy wife to do this for hubby! Very well written and incredibly arrousing! Keep submitting this type of work! seacoast02us@yahoo

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by sgtfury04/16/04

great present

loved the story... wives should be more like you ... adventursome.. tell me more stories

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by Anonymous04/16/04

what naughty wives deserve

That was hot! I like your style. You are so thoughtful of your husband and his friends. When you show your husband the pictures, I think you'll honestly have to show him the blowjob pictures too, won't you? I hope he realizes that a naughty wife like you deserves all the very best, including a good spanking. If you are spanked naked in front of Jay, that would be be a good lesson for you. Write more!

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by Hexxed04/17/04

meh

Hot but... I'd feel real weird if the wife of a buddy of mine called me up asking to take nekkid pics of her. Most likely gonna lead to nuthin but trouble. ;)

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by Anonymous04/17/04

Not great

Didnt sound believable at all. Came off like a porn movie plot.

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by Chikato08/28/04

It's Just OK!

None a porn movie plot it's this good.

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by Anonymous05/06/05

Not plausible.

It has the makings of a good erotic story. However, certain things were not plausible. For example, he wouldn't have been stroking his cock. Only a queer would write something like that. What would have been much more likely is he could have kissed her and then got undressed if she was receptive.

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by Anonymous12/08/05

Noy

After you show hubby the pictures, you will be served with divorce papers, you stupid cunt!

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by don8765412/08/05

Breeding time?

Maybe you should invite him back for more pictures, this time with his cum seeping from your pussy lips AFTER he has shot you full of his babymakers. And then next year he could come back in about 8 months and take more pictures of you with your and his baby peeking out of your cunt to say Hello to its daddy, complete with your rounded pregnant belly?

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by Anonymous08/25/06

Hubby

So her husband takes the pictures from her to be used as evidence in the divorce, throws her shitty ass out on the street and has his friends beat the shit out of Jay. A Happy Ending!

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by Anonymous05/14/07

And This Is A Loving Wives Story How?

Where is the romance? Where is the love? An unfaithful cum bag takes some hot shots "For The Husband" aided by one of HIS "Best Friends"? And if she is truly a "Loving Wife", why didn't she have a FE-male friend aid and assist her by taking the photos?

The title of this "Illicit Couplings" story (a more accurate title, no?) should be: "How I Fucked My Hubster's 'Best Friend' for Valentine's Day". Or, how's this: "How I gave Myself A Valentines' Day Present". Because this story had absolutely NOT ONE THING to do with a Loving Wife OR Valentine's Day. Sad to say, too.

If the dirtbag quiff put as much energy into giving her husband the real deal here, then she wouldn't be the Selfish, Vacuous, Asswipe Bitch HOBAG she naturally is. And She isn't deserving of any respect as a wife should be. And Vicious to boot.

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by RedRooster200409/16/07

Where's part two!!

Please don't stop writing. You have a fantastic imagination and a great style. I loved your story. Maybe we can have part two now?

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by Anonymous02/09/09

Ugh

Yet another story in the manner of the cheating whore....as usual, no "loving wife" to be found. I wonder if these authors are like the people who have fifty items and yet try to go through the "12 item or less" lane at the grocery, yeah they read the sign, but them promptly ignore it, and piss off everyone else around them. I must have skipped through 100 of these stories now, and all of them could be summed up in one sentence; "worthless cheating whore in desperate need of divorce papers!" The sequel could be "worthless wimp hubbies in desperate need of balls!" Round all that out with the trilogy series ender "worthless supposed best friends who fuck their friends wives and desperately need a two by four shoved up their ass....sideways!"

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by saratu02/28/11

Just another piece of shit!

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by betrayedbylove05/15/12

Slut

Another cheating slut wife. Only the beginning of the end for her and her husband.

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by deadone05/17/12

Slut, Gutter Slut

Ch. 2 - How she accidentally fuck another guy twice
Ch. 3 - Now that she has done that why not 50 guys 5 times
Just yet one more WACC/Slut story

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by LikesGoodWriting06/28/14

write more please

so well done and believeable!

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by pitbull402/16/15

u really trust that hubby will be ok for u to suck someone's cock while he was not there unless he is a spineless wimp like most of these hubbys on loving wife's that wont do nothing but sit and sulk where the slut cant see him u just give him the pictures so he can use it in your divorcé

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