Even the description on the title page is fucked up:
"A son tells confronts his mother about her secret."
Does he "tell" her or "confront" her? If you can't get the description right, why would people bother subjecting themselves to the actual story? Make an effort, man.
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Anonymous06/27/16
Take a bow !
Good story....take a deep breath.....now breathe slowly. Do you get my drift?
by
Anonymous09/21/16
gspot
he reached her gspot with his tong?must have a long tong.
YOU NEED AN EDITOR! Many, many spelling and grammar errors. It detracts from the story. I agree it's interesting how mom is so wanton when the opportunity presents itself. It is also physically impossible to reach a g-spot with a tongue unless you have a long tongue like Gene Simmons and she has the shortest vagina in the world.
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Having an threesome with both mom and Kristen would be a hot follow up.
Great story...so far
Can't wait for the next installment. Good job.
Perfect!
Wow! Such a great story. Love just how much the mother craves sex. Very good, very sexy, more please!
I found the writing to be pretty sloppy.
Even the description on the title page is fucked up:
"A son tells confronts his mother about her secret."
Does he "tell" her or "confront" her? If you can't get the description right, why would people bother subjecting themselves to the actual story? Make an effort, man.
Take a bow !
Good story....take a deep breath.....now breathe slowly. Do you get my drift?
gspot
he reached her gspot with his tong?must have a long tong.
Good story, but needs work!
YOU NEED AN EDITOR! Many, many spelling and grammar errors. It detracts from the story. I agree it's interesting how mom is so wanton when the opportunity presents itself. It is also physically impossible to reach a g-spot with a tongue unless you have a long tongue like Gene Simmons and she has the shortest vagina in the world.
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