Please keep the story going, love to read more about what they get up too.
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Anonymous06/27/16
This is a great series! Keep them coming. I feel like she needs to egg him on about knocking her up. It would give them both a thrill. Roger seems willing to risk it all for her already, and Jessica seems like she is a dominant submissive. This ending with her pregnant is the ultimate form of submission! Just keep writing!
HotKiwiMale: I've deciced to turn this story into a series, so you got your wish!
Anonymous: Not a chance in hell of Jessica getting knocked up. That is NOT my idea of either sexy or erotic. Sorry, but that just ain't happening.
anonintexas1999: That's what your imagination is for! I also didn't want the story to be too long, and to tell the tale of the rest of the night would have made it a novella instead of a short story.
You would be nice to explore both of their backgrounds, and what she is going to do about his teaching position and pay. More character development. Obviously, how and where she got to be so experienced for a nineteen year old.
I gave serious consideration into just how much background information to give on Roger and Jessica, and because this is a series of stories about their sexual escapades together and not a biographical series, I decided to keep background information to a bare minimum.
I alluded to Jessica doing something about Roger's pay in the second installmanet, and I fully intend to expound on that soon.
Lastly, I also alluded to Jessica's level of sexual experience in the third installment and gave what I thought was sufficient information on that. Sometimes it's best to leave the details to the reader's imagination instead of providing the facts, so that's what I did on this point.
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Please keep the story going, love to read more about what they get up too.
This is a great series! Keep them coming. I feel like she needs to egg him on about knocking her up. It would give them both a thrill. Roger seems willing to risk it all for her already, and Jessica seems like she is a dominant submissive. This ending with her pregnant is the ultimate form of submission! Just keep writing!
wasted opportunity
I wish you had described more of the rest of the night. Otherwise, great.
HotKiwiMale: I've deciced to turn this story into a series, so you got your wish!
Anonymous: Not a chance in hell of Jessica getting knocked up. That is NOT my idea of either sexy or erotic. Sorry, but that just ain't happening.
anonintexas1999: That's what your imagination is for! I also didn't want the story to be too long, and to tell the tale of the rest of the night would have made it a novella instead of a short story.
Thank you!
Thanks so much for this story AND deciding to do a series!! I can't wait!
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You would be nice to explore both of their backgrounds, and what she is going to do about his teaching position and pay. More character development. Obviously, how and where she got to be so experienced for a nineteen year old.
To Boomerbill
I gave serious consideration into just how much background information to give on Roger and Jessica, and because this is a series of stories about their sexual escapades together and not a biographical series, I decided to keep background information to a bare minimum.
I alluded to Jessica doing something about Roger's pay in the second installmanet, and I fully intend to expound on that soon.
Lastly, I also alluded to Jessica's level of sexual experience in the third installment and gave what I thought was sufficient information on that. Sometimes it's best to leave the details to the reader's imagination instead of providing the facts, so that's what I did on this point.
Thanks for the feedback!
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