Good build up. very nicely approached the the hesitation between two sisters. Short and sweet.
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Anonymous08/29/05
very HOT!!!
I loved this story - it is so HOT. The themes work beautifully together, plus it is very well written, with all the details you need to picture exactly what is taking place, and how each character feels. Perhaps, it could have been a touch longer, to build the steam just a bit more, but very erotic nonetheless!
Wow! That was a great story! You have just become one of my favorite writers. There was plenty of background to make the story credible but not so much that you have to skip over major sections to get to the juicy stuff. Excellent!
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Anonymous06/07/06
Wowee
Dear sweet lord that was totally awesome!
liked it a lot, good build up, def one of my favorites...
Thank You
English
Short and Sweet
I'm not a big incest fan, but I thought this was a pleasant little romp, especially for its length.
Good one
Good build up. very nicely approached the the hesitation between two sisters. Short and sweet.
very HOT!!!
I loved this story - it is so HOT. The themes work beautifully together, plus it is very well written, with all the details you need to picture exactly what is taking place, and how each character feels. Perhaps, it could have been a touch longer, to build the steam just a bit more, but very erotic nonetheless!
I'm in love with litpervgrrl
Unbelievably fucking hot!!
Wow! That was a great story! You have just become one of my favorite writers. There was plenty of background to make the story credible but not so much that you have to skip over major sections to get to the juicy stuff. Excellent!
Wowee
Dear sweet lord that was totally awesome!
liked it a lot, good build up, def one of my favorites...
Thank You
Great!
I have only read 3 stories, but you're my new favorite author. All the characters seem so real, a refreshing change from most other writers here.
yummy
i only wished they had gone further with each other
100%
So well written
I just love it when chics lick asshole - it's so fucking hot
... and by the way
... and by the way litpervgrrl - your name totally turns me on
Fantastic story
Definitely one of the best stories I have read. A sequel would be very hot. Keep writing!
WOW
you combined 3 of the best things in an erotica story; incest, lesbians, and a goody goody girl
MMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...................
Holy shit.....that was so damn hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
More.......please!!
Very vivid images of these two...omg......
finger licking good
I usually font read lez stories but this bone was very good. I loved the ass licking too. keep it up.
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