by indian cum slut
Please write more stories. Perhaps you will keep the same theme with the Indian girl, but use other parts of her body.
Too often cock suckers suck just for their partners enjoyment. Indian Cock Sucker sucks for her enjoyment and it shows in her writing! Great job!
This is one of the best stories i've read on here. it's intense and detailed, submissive, yet not always. there are elements of the story that i didn't care for, but overall it was still great. definately the story of a woman i'd like to hook up with.
Best pure oral story I've read on Literotica. Keep it, ...err..., coming!
This is a mind-blowing narration of a very detailed account of a very lovely blow job. We were both turned on by this and in fact my wife tried to give me a similar and very intense blow job. It was a load blowing blow job.
Thank-you Indian Cum Slut for this very lovely experience. We liked your style of writing and both of us had shattering orgasms.
I loved this story. I'd like to read more from you with the
same theme of the indian girl in the future. Perhaps next time go into more detail describing her body, colors, shades, that kind of vibe. Once again, this was a hot story.
So hot it should be a given to women as a manual about how to mentally approach a blow-job. If I were to recieve one with that much enthusiam and intensity I'd be hooked for life.
FIRST TRULY HORNY DESCRIPTION---MAYBE THE WRITER IS NOT A FEM- BUT SUPERB IMAGINNATION--LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE
Must be friends of the author. This is an okay first up effort. There is nothing original here.
this is the hottest cocksucking story i have read. my cock was throbbing without even touching it.
Don't get me wrong. This story was great but you do need to branch out to other parts of the body.
indian cum slut has turned the blow job into ultimate form of art and narration is utterly beautiful. must read for every woman and learn something from the same. great
Fantastic tale, which built nicely.
It was a fantastic turn-on, i really hope you write some more.
Even without any storyline and even after directly jumping on sex, this is as hot as it gets...or wait...is there more? Your imagination is so nasty and so beautifully penned down that, I couldn't really hold myself for long after reading this naughty piece of lustful imagination. For you I have only this to say...Indian cum slut...you are a hot and talented little bitch! One would be lucky to have you & I am eagerly waiting for another such fun filled fantasy.
I felt like you were really here, with me.
It's written so well, with such passion and llove, that the experience comes live... Amazing.
i endorse all the comments here; all the positive ones; come on Cum give us one more...Lusty for you...
Where is the next installment,? Love your writing, and what you write even more - how could one not cum reading this story, thank you, but write more
This is absolutely the most extensive and erotic fellatio descriptions I have run across. One would not be wrong to use the term high-quality pornography, as there is no story, just pure sexual-arousing scenes. It is faultlessy descriptive and well-written. I lament you have not yet made other contributions.