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by Anonymous

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by YDD04/08/04

2 Flowers for the price of 1

Both are enjoyable to read, but I prefer the second. However I would call it "erotic", the traditional metaphor demands it.

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by Tathagata04/08/04

Lovely

use of the lotus and all it's meaning.
creation, love, enlightenment...
not to mention the sexual aspects
great poem that can be read and understood on many levels
you continue to impress

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by don8765409/22/05

Cool, Smooth....

Very peaceful, yet erotic if you think about it.....

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by LeBroz01/27/07

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Have to second those thoughts from YDD; that second piece is HOT!

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by LeBroz01/27/07

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Have to second those thoughts from YDD; that second piece is HOT!

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