It is a good story but would be more enjoyable with correct grammar and punctuated in a way that clearly states what the writer is trying to say.
Good ideas, but constantly tripping over repeated words and weird phrases isn't sexy.
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It is a good story but would be more enjoyable with correct grammar and punctuated in a way that clearly states what the writer is trying to say.
Could have been a contender
Good ideas, but constantly tripping over repeated words and weird phrases isn't sexy.
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