All Comments on 'Weekend of Discipline Ch. 01'

wow! i can not wait to read more- please do not keep us waiting- made me so wet before they have really gotten started. i would be just as bad as she was in her situation. hurry hurry- i want more:)~~~

The only thing I didn't like was that it ended so soon! It would have been great to have more -- if you know what I mean!

What a great start. I can't wait for the next installment. Had me tingling before it was over. Is the next chaper finished yet..more more more

I LOVED this story and have been waiting and checking every day for part 2 -- you ARE going to continue, arent' you? Please hurry!

Hi Everyone, It's me: kyakjl. I feel bad i've left you all hanging on part two. I had no idea that the story would go over so well. Just wanted to let you know that part 2 is coming up soon, I promise. I'll have it done within the next couple days. Thanks for all the positive feedback!

Loved it amd I will be looking for part 2 or will it become a series!

This is a great story! I look forward to more.

Hi, I wondered if part 2 was created in the end? I'm doubting it as I don't see another story under your name but you never know... It happens to match a fantasy I've had for years. Thanks for your erotic story! :)

This story is quite unique, it is written extremely well and is almost my exact fantasy. I REALLY enjoyed reading this... I hope you write more!! Many thanks x

wow .. captured beautifully her embarrassment and how that turned her on ...

allowing to urinate should be a given, to cum,,, well that is another.