All Comments on 'Am I Evil Ch. 02'

Great sequel! Looking forwardto #3.

This is very good! Thank you!

I can't wait for part three!

I don't usually read stories like this ... But maybe I will start ... Excellent story I have sure enjoyed it this far and looking forward to many more chapters! Cheers Lance

so far I just found them and read chapter 1 and 2 back to back. Eagerly awaiting more adventures from them.

Honestly the nipple clamps and ball gags and all that were just a distraction from the domination. The character also didn't seem to be developed to have that trait. What made him so capable of breaching all those boundaries? I enjoyed myself and what character development and insights were provided were on point, but I recommend focusing more on the social rather than physical. Let your character's desires and frustration be the pivot upon which the action takes place, rather than physical gimmicks. What made this 20 year old so able to walk over to a 35-40 year old woman's house and force himself upon her physically? What made this woman so forceful on the outside crumble and allow it. The permission from the husband seemed entirely unnecessary. Thanks for a good read.

Fun and hot...

But spelling mistakes very distracting...

I agree w/another comment. This is not something u just hop into. B&D is a lifestyle constantly under development. Not something u can do because u find out your neighbor is into it. Also many women may fantasize of an intruder/ dominant sex act, but if someone actually tries it they are liable to get shot! But if you keep in mind this is just a fantasy coming out of a male adolescent, it can be entertaining.

Well done! Probably the hottest series I've read here in awhile.....I'm looking forward to Chapter 3

Time for another chapter!