Masturbation Control

Nice start!

I like your writing and absolutely love femdom and chastity stories. However I suggest a bit more build up to add to the fantasy. Thanks for sharing!

Fantastic !!
Thank you.

Promising but failed to realise that we want details details details...

There was no description of his submissive nature before she begins this project-or how she knew the cage would fit (she had the measurements?....really?...how did she do that?) His submissive nature is a must before there can be any hope of success.The last few lines showed some promise but I think the writer got bored. She certainly should not be promising a continuation of some of the hottest sex he's ever had... maybe that's true if you mean just in his head -but we must remember that he has been naughty,he's been caught and he should be contrite and want to make amends( put this on?..certainly((imagining he'll soon convince her to take it off again))
This is lazy storytelling. I gave 4 stars but on reflection it should have been 2 stars,and 1hours corner time.

I Regret Your Regrets, But....

Sorry you thought the writing was "lazy", but that's a critique and I expect there to be differences. However, there are a few items that should be mentioned:
1- I don't generally like to read long stories when I'm going for erotica, so I don't write erotica that way. I acknowledge that a great deal more background and characterization could have been done; while some prefer that, I chose not to.
2 - The reader could (should) presume that she had some idea he would agree, or perhaps that most men would have a certain degree of that nature in the right situation - which I believe was presented in her recollections of discussions with her friend
3 - If you knew something about chastity devices you would know that they come with a variety of sized rings and spacers and even a first guess would be good enough to get him into it as that is the step that changes things; adjustments in fit are details after the scope of the story
4 - I'm not sure how "hottest sex" automatically equals frequency - that is certainly not true in my experience or a great number of people I know. That sounds like laziness in finding things to criticize.
5 - His amends were clearly spelled out in the final paragraph, where he will be tending to her pleasure and sometimes missing his.
I'd love to read some of your work, as an example of how it should be done.