May I Know Your Name?

lyrical

great read ty ... evocative and heartwarming ... unusual for this particular type of story

are you kidding me?

"her steamy swamp of viscous slime"
wow...that just sounds so tempting

"Every time he saw her voluptuousness body"

I think maybe you should buy a dictionary

love it

Very moving story, different from the usual in this category. There were a few typos and word choices that detracted from the story; those can be easily fixed with the use of a good editor. Keep up the good work and continue writing for this category even if it is a departure from your usual.

A nice story, in a wierd way

This was a rape, but in some wort of bizarre way, it morphed into a romantic piece. As for the speling errors, they are bound to happen. In this case they did not detract from the story.

keep going

it was a good story, but could be tremendously improved if you consulted either a dictionary or an editor. you misused quite a few words and it was distracting to me. you have potential here, though. don't give up.

I loved the story! It's so nice to find a writer that takes care with spelling and grammar! My only complaint is that, although it wasn't difficult for me to read, some of the "bigger words" almost seemed extraneous. It's close to sounding like you just used an online thesaurus a thousand times. I also wish I could get to know your characters a bit better because you make them so intriguing. Other than that, I gave you a 5 for a refreshing and interesting read.

Awesome!

Nicely written!

Excellent!

Loved the story! Fantastic vocabulary you have! Hope to see more of your stories!