Succubus

Nice

Sweet story!

Amazing

A awesome story, it was one of the best I've read in awhile I came across it out of random curiosity. Keep up the good work it was a great story. =]
-A

I thought it was beautiful, but also sad. At the same time, I hope my first love is as mysterious, wonderful, and patient, even if it means losing the person
Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all? lol

A very...

touching story and a very gentle succubus. I liked it. You gave it a dreamy quality, as if I were in her head, not just hearing her tell her story. Nice work.

Enigma

Melacynthe, you have written a beautifully strange little tale here, all the better for the sex being understated. Congratulations.

Brian