by LadyDaisy
...amazing....
...pile of crap.
This "story" was so poor and ridiculous that it actually made me me laugh.
Sorry, I've got no "constructive" criticism for this chapter. It doesn't deserve any - it's an even bigger waste of five minutes than either of the previous two. Like the others, it reads as if it was written by a middle-school boy. I've gotten wetter from reading a laundry label.
Also, stories with FFM threesome scenes do *not* belong in Lesbian Sex - they belong in Group Sex. Know your audience. Most of us don't want to read about dicks and semen. Next time you publish - heaven forbid - get the category right.
Yes i agree...wrong category. I'm a lesbian and i come here to read about women who love women. I'm not interested in reading about guys cumming.
Hallo LadyDaisy!
Hmm, well I stopped reading at (Male Prostitute Boy Toy),,, because male sex is not my thing and this definitely does not belong under (Lesbian Sex)!
SORRY.
Gay Kat.