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Angelineabout 20 years agoOh Razz!
What a beautiful piece of writing, so thoughtful and delicately wrought. This is one of your best. :) Ange.
YDDabout 20 years agoZounds! - Silent Sounds
A good one,
but I would see one change made:
"Bring see colors
colliding
systems failing,
silent sounds
Deep chasms,
rushing winds"
"systems failing" is too harshly modern for my ear given the rest of the work.
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