Doctors Orders

Good first story

I complement your decision to write it the third person. The flow is a little choppy but pretty good for a first effort, and that will get better with practice. Keep writing!

Needs an editor.

You had some grammar issues, so you may want to get an editor to help. Otherwise, this was a decent first story, though a bit short. I will assume that there will be a few chapters to follow this up.

Liked it. Keep it going!

Great story

Great premise. I hope you continue this and add to the story. You set it up well for a sequel. Terrific work overall. Big fan.

I liked it

was a good read,could I have the name of that Dr, lol need to take my wife to him, lol. Joking aside was really a good read, thought it could have been longer though

Great Story

You have unique and original storylnes. Keep writing. 5*s

Got to get more exciting

Please continue this story line. It is most erotic and a wonderful premise to most men who would love to take their wife to this doctor.

Keep on writing!

I really like this story. I hope the series continues