Family Affair: Backseat Sister

Loved it

Please please please continue this series, you're a very talented writer. It's been a while since I've read something this good.

Nope.

A few things.

1) The sister moaning brothers name? Tired cliche. Please do better.
2) The sister literally said "LOL" in a sentence. It killed my boner in like no time at all.
3) Can't be romantic love between siblings and also lay the groundwork sworn for fucking mom. Realism is hot. Stretch the boundaries of reality, sure, but this read like a porno, and you're clearly capable of better work.

4) THE SISTER SAID LOL IN A SENTENCE. BAD GRAMMAR TAKES THE READER OUT OF YOUR STORY.

Step your game up.

I think its pretty good

I'm more of a Motherfucker kind of guy but I love the story and I would say go for a second part really maybe include mom or even grand mommy ;)

again great story good work

More please!

I definitly like your thought process ... can't wait for the next chapter. The only thing that could make it better is if it was one of your illustration stories...yum!

Ideas

Absolutely love this story. I'm hoping for this to continue. Here are the story ideas I like from the list you provided:

1. Dad takes dick too
2. Orgy
3. Swapping tents

Great Story

I always love reading your stories. Please continue this series, I would love to read them all.

More!

I love all the ideas you've posted as continuations to the story. I look forward to reading them if you decide to write them. Just don't forget your other series in the process. We need more "What Mom Knows!"

OK

Don't do the FAMILY AFFAIR: DAD TAKES DICK TOO!

great

All of the above syory ideas

great story, and all those ideas sound good too

Amazing

I love the idea of backsear sex when others are in the car. With this one i would have them back in the back but this time he takes her anal cherry too. Keeping the theme towards family the mom tells them if their having sex to keep it safe, but the only thing available is the grandmas sleeping pills, so she drugs dad to sleep because in her words he wouldnt be ready to deal with this and he would want to just turn back and go home which she wouldnt want and tanya revealing her other dirty fantasy "anal" she wants that to be taken aswell while their on their trip.

So mum has drugged dad to sleep in the front seat, mums driving and the kids are in the back fucking and phillips taking tanyas other cherry with as much noise as she wants.

But thats just what i see could happen next. Goodluck and hope you continue.

Loved it!

It seems that you got your "Groove" back!

Thanks for your inspiration

I always enjoy your stories and they are a great inspiration for my masturbation fantasies... I'm not into the gay aspect of porn so I won't read the daddy does dick chapter... But all the rest does get my motor running... Keep up the great work and keep us cumming .... Back for more... He he he

I agree with everything Thewild83 said

Yes yes yes

Your readers will tell you if.a story should be continued. Add my vote to all those below shouting yes. And dont forget aunty and grandma.

great

very hot story needs a part 2

Ideas

Good story as always I think the bathroom with mommy or tent swapping are good ideas to follow but I would like to read more abouth the brother and sis

extensions

seems to me: Mom may have experience with her brother (kid's uncle) that Dad does/does not know about... this could turn into a real family outing at the next holiday gathering?

fantastic

Please keep it up. Your my favorite!

you are a Great Writer, I enjoy everything you Post, Thank you

Definitely need another one

Another great story, another good cum. Please write another.

Loved it.

You do should the mother and daughter swap tents one next.

Definitely continue..

... With "Bathroom Mommy" followed by "Swapping Tents". You writing amazingly well, and hot stories. Looking forward to reading more in this series.

Definitely continue

This was really good. Not a fan of the " dad takes dick too" idea but your the writer so by all means keep engrossing us in your tales

Excellent story

Just the right length and very enjoyable but why, why, why does there always have to be an 'anonymous' asshole who's so sure your story is crap, he has to hide behind anonymity. Further episodes? Why shouldn't mom have her share and why shouldn't sis have a rerun? Go for it.

Love your work!

Jasmine, anytime I see your stories I am drawn to read them. I am never disappointed and always hope for follow ons. You are a gifted and experienced writer so I leave it to your judgement as to whether there should be another story or not. Just know that I will be there reading it because it has your name on it. Thank you for your submissions.

Keep going

Aside from the father being included, I would love to read more. What about mom's sister too?

More

For once you could do something different and not add another partner. Bringing the mom (and not dad) into the mix would be hot but you already did that in numerous stories.

Why not make a story about the brother/sister relationship? They had sex but what about the future? They said they loved each other so maybe they want to be together. The mother knows so she can help them to be together.

Anyway, the story was great (as always with your incest ones) and you are one of the best author on Literotica.

Amazing

I for one vote continue. All those titles sound great, even the Dad Takes Dick Too. I've always have been a fan of gay incest, brother/bother, father/son, uncle/nephew, you get the picture. So don't worry about those few who cringe at gay incest and can only seem to handle lesbian incest because you do have some very willing readers who would love to read that story. 😉

Really..?

Really..? Usually I like your "stories" very much and even up into the 'WOW' or should I say the "100%" of the best ~~ but get real here -- bumpy road and a bloody "Virgin" at that..! Bet there Dad really liked the new color of the back seat.!
C'mon you can write a better story than this as you have showed that many - - many
times over.!!**** My rant is over.^^

CONTINUE PLESE

Except that dad takes dick too, I love all other ideas. Well written. Such stories should not be stand alone.

once again great. also agree no dad takes dick. need a little more nylon also. please keep going.

keep going

would say swapping tents so dad gets in on it too

Personally, I don't care for gay stories, so I'd skip reading that one. Excellent as always SSL

All of them!

Great story, like usual. I would like to read all of your ideas, so please write them all for us!

I agree on the swapping tents..great story!

As to your wondering about continuing.

This was a good story, but really very similar to your already done 'Backseat Mommy' series so, as regards continuing, it might be going back to the well once too often.

What if

Mom continued to be a voyeur in a dominant roll. Using her kids to fulfill fantasies of hers involving thanks and retribution. The sexual services of the children to a steadfast sister or brother. Payback for a slight from an aunt or uncle. I would enjoy this taking a turn to the dark side.

Let mommy have a ride too. And then he should knock up both of them.

What a great story.

Loved his sisters response

Great start

I think this is a rest beginning to a very fun and twisted family relationship. Stopping my grandmas house on the way home would be great after leaving. Them finding out it is a family tradition. Always great Silk and i cannot wait for your next one.

each one of the proposed stories would be great

Hope you will follow up with the new series

More

you need to add the mom into it

family affair

Crazy threesome would be interesting

Obviously

Mom needs to go for a ride, possibly the threesome previously mentioned

I'd love another chapter.

Either the threesome or dad loves cock too would be great. Or both.

loved it i say threesome or bathroom but plz no gay

More

And yes a part 2,3,4,....etc. Will be great.. Good stoirie telling

Yeah

I think mom wants a ride

More but no same-sex stuff

Yes, continue the story. More brother-sister and Mom being OK with it, keeping Dad ignorant. Maybe Mom demands a romp with son as payment to keep cool?