One of the very best I have ever read. I'd vote for a continuation using your suggested title; FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME
Son pleases Mom & Sister while Dad is away. That could get as crazy horny as Backseat Sister ever was.
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Anonymous06/30/16
I agree with the anon
The pace and feeling of the story is very good , How ever i wouldnt like to see the daughter become a full on sex god now , An inoccent girl who just loves her brother is perfect for this story . And the daf shouldn't be involved , Too many stories involve the dad and ruin the pace of the story ,
good writing and have an amazing day/night
Hi
Thanks to all the on this story.
I have so many possible ways this may go that my head has been spinning.
I started part 2 but now may change the direction slightly... To Family Affair: Backseat Sodomy. Not sure, but maybe,
To the critics:
As for bleeding... She broke her own hymen... most girls do... I did.
As for similar to Backseat Mommy... Other than backseat sex I do t think there are many similarities... I also used a different perspective ... mom in backseat mommy verses the Mae view here).
As for pussy smell... Good point.... Alas this is a story about backseat fucking and I would imagine it there had to be a bit of stretching the grips of reality for such a story.
Yes, an excellent erotic story !! Well, Mom I think wants to be screwed by her son or maybe joining brother and sister; when Dad's away. If her brother shows Mom the video; I am sure she'll get very aroused too. Of course, Tanya and her brother need to go at each other when their parents are Not home and have to figure out a way to keep this going when she's away at college ?? Maybe, he can go too ?? In any event; after the washing machine episode, this is too hot as is the car trip to just let it go. Cannot wait for this series to continue. Thank you !!!
Agree with those who've said explicitly couching this as romantic love only to start adding participants to the mix would make no sense. You tend to escalate things to the point of diminishing returns, and that would be an example.
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Anonymous07/01/16
Awesome
Mom should switch places n ride son
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Anonymous07/01/16
Don't add the dad!
Just get the Mother in to make sure she keeps the secret! (and end it at 2 chapters).
I'd love to see the mum have a quickie with the son while the dad's in the shower, then teach the sister how to suck and fuck like a champ.
Between continuing the story or letting it end here. I'm on board with all of your ideas including the father-son bit. You write gay male so well it makes a straight guy like me hard. But I would like a romantic story between brother and sister since you've done something similar with "cocksucking college sister". I vote that you continue with the mother and daughter threesome, the dad getting into it and the eventual orgy. But whatever you decide I'll know I'll love it. Whew!
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Anonymous07/01/16
LOVE YOUR WORK
* * * * * Excitingly erotic / beautifully dirty. Great final line "..... brother's cum in your hair." This definitely requires a sequel - I vote for "Bathroom Mommy". I love silk stockings, garter belts and wet panties.
Love, anon j. o.
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Anonymous07/01/16
Great story
I honestly loved the story, and want to read all of the ideas you have to continue it. Please continue!
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Anonymous07/01/16
Swapping tents!
Swapping tents sounds very interesting! as does Threesome!
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Anonymous07/01/16
Love it!!!
I think the threesome with mom & sister sounds like an awesome second part
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Anonymous07/01/16
Good Story...keep it going.
I loved the story and premise, however, I did struggle with the guy getting on his knees. Sorry, but dad would figure something was up with that move. It became a bit unreal at that point. Continue on with mom, sis and brother...that would be a great story!
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Anonymous07/01/16
Ultimately, however you decide to pursue it is your call. On the one hand, without taking a little risk, there's no chance at a big payoff, especially with a series of stories. On the other hand, this story is solid enough to be a standalone, with a very self-contained plot and few, if any, loose ends that need tying up.
If it makes the decision any easier, you could always put a few other stories out and return to this when you feel more confident.
At first before I started reading I thought it would be just another story, how wrong was I. Loved the build up and the characters got me hard and stroking. Loved moms comment at the end about brothers cum in her hair. Mom and son have to get it on. In fact any of the subjects would be awesome.
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Anonymous07/01/16
i love it !!
make second part please !!!!
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Anonymous07/01/16
More please!
Fantastic! Really look forward to moree parts to this story
I'm bisexual (male), so I enjoy your stories that have an element of f/f or m/m content, but also like to read stories with the 'family' element as well.
This one feels like it could involve people on the mother's side of the family. Perhaps the cabin is a large one, owned by wife's family for generations, and plenty of rooms/space. Another family could join up this (or another weekend), and the mixing of new stories experiences could continue. 'Boys fishing weekend', 'Ladies annual event', New Years with 2 or 3 families. The kids' cousins could provide the foray into various relationships (d/s, m/m, f/f), etc... Even had a selfishly fleeting thought that a brother/sister cousin of theirs was a crossdressing sissy, submissive to the older sister
Just a few thoughts from an appreciative reader, think you have the makings of a really good extended story
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Anonymous07/01/16
WOW......
Very good....keep going on this story !
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Anonymous07/01/16
Needs to continue
I think you need at least a second chapter after you left off with "you still have some of your brother's cum in your hair." Contrary to what most others said, the father would have to pretty dense to not have an idea something was going on with his children. The Mother obviously knew and by her reaction maybe knew before or had a hand in what happened. I like most of your ideas except no gay definitely and I usually just browse through the lesbian part unless it is part of a heterosexual act also. Extended family as some suggested is ok, but I have seen some get way carried away. I personally like daddy/daughter mixed with family. Example, Mom helping daughter fuck dad and son comes in while they are at it and bangs mom. To me the story goes downhill after the climax and to me the a climax in such a story would be when the daughter cries "I'm cumming Daddy, cum with me and in me." At the same time I don't get off on fathers getting their daughter pregnant, so safe sex should be practiced.
English
as always 5 stars!
always love your stories, read them all at least once....keep up the awesome work.
Great story hope you continue the good work
2nd story
I iike the idea of bathroom mommy or crazy threesome
great job keep it coming
great job keep it coming
keep going
I like the idea of Mom being supportive and the kids doing the fucking.
Times have changed
So I'm just guessing that nineteen-year-old pussy doesn't smell like pussy anymore???
Love to hear more about these fuckers...
Would love some all-in-the-family action...
Hot
That was so hot and well written, but that ending was a major plot twist. Can't wait to see what you have planned next. Mom? More sister? Dad?
Everyone sounds fucking hot.
please no
do not let dad get involved
Very Erotic
One of the very best I have ever read. I'd vote for a continuation using your suggested title; FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME
Son pleases Mom & Sister while Dad is away. That could get as crazy horny as Backseat Sister ever was.
I agree with the anon
The pace and feeling of the story is very good , How ever i wouldnt like to see the daughter become a full on sex god now , An inoccent girl who just loves her brother is perfect for this story . And the daf shouldn't be involved , Too many stories involve the dad and ruin the pace of the story ,
good writing and have an amazing day/night
authors note
Hi
Thanks to all the on this story.
I have so many possible ways this may go that my head has been spinning.
I started part 2 but now may change the direction slightly... To Family Affair: Backseat Sodomy. Not sure, but maybe,
To the critics:
As for bleeding... She broke her own hymen... most girls do... I did.
As for similar to Backseat Mommy... Other than backseat sex I do t think there are many similarities... I also used a different perspective ... mom in backseat mommy verses the Mae view here).
As for pussy smell... Good point.... Alas this is a story about backseat fucking and I would imagine it there had to be a bit of stretching the grips of reality for such a story.
After all... This is fantasy.
Jasmine June 30th
go for it
Lots of potential. Keep the erotic work flowing
Yes, an excellent erotic story !! Well, Mom I think wants to be screwed by her son or maybe joining brother and sister; when Dad's away. If her brother shows Mom the video; I am sure she'll get very aroused too. Of course, Tanya and her brother need to go at each other when their parents are Not home and have to figure out a way to keep this going when she's away at college ?? Maybe, he can go too ?? In any event; after the washing machine episode, this is too hot as is the car trip to just let it go. Cannot wait for this series to continue. Thank you !!!
Quit while you're ahead
Agree with those who've said explicitly couching this as romantic love only to start adding participants to the mix would make no sense. You tend to escalate things to the point of diminishing returns, and that would be an example.
Awesome
Mom should switch places n ride son
Don't add the dad!
Just get the Mother in to make sure she keeps the secret! (and end it at 2 chapters).
I'd love to see the mum have a quickie with the son while the dad's in the shower, then teach the sister how to suck and fuck like a champ.
Really poor story
Painful to read. Move on and kill this.
Keep it going
That's good start keep it going
Yes!!
This story was perfection!
I'm so torn
Between continuing the story or letting it end here. I'm on board with all of your ideas including the father-son bit. You write gay male so well it makes a straight guy like me hard. But I would like a romantic story between brother and sister since you've done something similar with "cocksucking college sister". I vote that you continue with the mother and daughter threesome, the dad getting into it and the eventual orgy. But whatever you decide I'll know I'll love it. Whew!
LOVE YOUR WORK
* * * * * Excitingly erotic / beautifully dirty. Great final line "..... brother's cum in your hair." This definitely requires a sequel - I vote for "Bathroom Mommy". I love silk stockings, garter belts and wet panties.
Love, anon j. o.
Great story
I honestly loved the story, and want to read all of the ideas you have to continue it. Please continue!
Swapping tents!
Swapping tents sounds very interesting! as does Threesome!
Love it!!!
I think the threesome with mom & sister sounds like an awesome second part
Good Story...keep it going.
I loved the story and premise, however, I did struggle with the guy getting on his knees. Sorry, but dad would figure something was up with that move. It became a bit unreal at that point. Continue on with mom, sis and brother...that would be a great story!
Ultimately, however you decide to pursue it is your call. On the one hand, without taking a little risk, there's no chance at a big payoff, especially with a series of stories. On the other hand, this story is solid enough to be a standalone, with a very self-contained plot and few, if any, loose ends that need tying up.
If it makes the decision any easier, you could always put a few other stories out and return to this when you feel more confident.
Another amazing story
At first before I started reading I thought it would be just another story, how wrong was I. Loved the build up and the characters got me hard and stroking. Loved moms comment at the end about brothers cum in her hair. Mom and son have to get it on. In fact any of the subjects would be awesome.
i love it !!
make second part please !!!!
More please!
Fantastic! Really look forward to moree parts to this story
All can say is outstanding.
Can't wait for more.
Great Story
Five Stars.
Loved this story and I love ALL of your ideas for continuation - just please, continue!
Another Story Please
Great story! And I love the swapping tents idea!
God more please!
That was so unbelievable hot. Please do more
Part 2
Great as a stand alone. Well written, but please have at least a part 2 to ease that cliffhanger at the end of part 1
keep it going
yes you can keep it going, in the UK our age laws are lower than in the US
So hot!
I can just picture this happening to someone, somewhere. Makes me wish I had a (horny) sister!
Loved this one too :-)
I'm bisexual (male), so I enjoy your stories that have an element of f/f or m/m content, but also like to read stories with the 'family' element as well.
This one feels like it could involve people on the mother's side of the family. Perhaps the cabin is a large one, owned by wife's family for generations, and plenty of rooms/space. Another family could join up this (or another weekend), and the mixing of new stories experiences could continue. 'Boys fishing weekend', 'Ladies annual event', New Years with 2 or 3 families. The kids' cousins could provide the foray into various relationships (d/s, m/m, f/f), etc... Even had a selfishly fleeting thought that a brother/sister cousin of theirs was a crossdressing sissy, submissive to the older sister
Just a few thoughts from an appreciative reader, think you have the makings of a really good extended story
WOW......
Very good....keep going on this story !
Needs to continue
I think you need at least a second chapter after you left off with "you still have some of your brother's cum in your hair." Contrary to what most others said, the father would have to pretty dense to not have an idea something was going on with his children. The Mother obviously knew and by her reaction maybe knew before or had a hand in what happened. I like most of your ideas except no gay definitely and I usually just browse through the lesbian part unless it is part of a heterosexual act also. Extended family as some suggested is ok, but I have seen some get way carried away. I personally like daddy/daughter mixed with family. Example, Mom helping daughter fuck dad and son comes in while they are at it and bangs mom. To me the story goes downhill after the climax and to me the a climax in such a story would be when the daughter cries "I'm cumming Daddy, cum with me and in me." At the same time I don't get off on fathers getting their daughter pregnant, so safe sex should be practiced.
Don't stop
I know ... that's what she said.
Another!
Please write another chapter
More stories
Keep writing this series
Keep going, loved it
Bathroom Mommy sounds good. I enjoy all your writings
more
write stories for all of the new ideas, your chapter 2's are just fine
Great
Bathroom Mommy
More
Very good. Would enjoy more chapters.
These sound good:
FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY
Mom decides she needs a ride on her son's big cock.
FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME
Son pleases Mom & Sister while Dad is away.
FAMILY AFFAIR: ORGY
A heavy storm leads to fun in the tent.
Bathroom mommy for sure!
doesn't mother ride in the back on the way back
More
More but leave dad in the dark
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