Please continue just as you outlined at the end of the story.
Could be your best series yet!!
by
Anonymous07/31/16
More bro/sis
I vote you continue, but with JUST the siblings. I don't care whether or not mom cares, or preferably you continue from an alternate ending where mom never found out. These two siblings have real chemistry, that I would love to see continued without involving anyone else joining.
Yes please continue on as you write great stories and yes start off with the mother,sister and brother go at it when the father goes away for the day.Then have the mother wanting her son by herself in the washroom or somewhere in the house.Then so top it off have the mother and the daughter have the son in the back see on the way home.
But if honest I would explore bro and sis together sneaking around slightly helped by mom more and more until you start to bring the rest of the family in.
I love it when women catch people having sex, we already know what 90% of guys will do (watch or try to join), but it's always interesting to see a woman's reaction to such an event.
But my vote is for the first two: FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY &
FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME
Yes part two and I agree leave dad out and make it mom and daughter and son in the end. But more son and daughter and also son and mom and have daughter spy on them and then join in at a later date.
Am I the only one who wants to know how 2 people could be fucking in the back seat and the driver not knowing. HELLO. Have you ever been in this position yourself? There is no way to mask the unmistakeable smell of sex in a motor car and unless both parents had both lost there sense of smell they would have to know just what was happening in the back.
Still, forgetting this lack of detail, the story was inspiring and an OK source of penile stimulation, meaning it caused me to get a fat so it was worth a read but not a 5.
by
Anonymous09/11/16
A good twist on the mom/son car ride......yum! So delish! Please continue!
Wow..your story wanting for more...your stories are always a good read. Please continue...but also bring in the aunt and cousins....:)
I love your stories, I hope you continue this one, I actually wish this one was longer, kudos to you!
by
Anonymous09/13/16
From what I can see you get the most negative sequel feedback when things are taken too far.
Have you considered having the mother being approving and even helping to cover for them without direct involvement?
by
Anonymous09/20/16
Please Continue This Story......
It's a great story and I'd love to see ALL of the suggestions cum to life as only you can tell it.
I really enjoyed your version of backseat sex... but if you write a sequel, I would like to read about an encounter of these two siblings having loving sex without the cars' backseat location. Perhaps somewhere they can truly show each other how much love they can demonstrate thru (during?) sex but in much more comfortable surroundings.
Part 2 is written and almost done editing and will be out later in October.
It is called Bathroom Mommy and even has a bit of a twist.
Jasmine
by
Anonymous10/02/16
can't wait for part 2 and more parts! I love most of your stories
by
Anonymous10/15/16
additional story idea
Mom decides she needs a ride on her son's big cock...yes, that sounds like a hot continuation on where the car ride story ended. This was an extremely hot scenario.
This part is great and I'm currently working on Part TWO. I've completed editing to the point at which Philip is busy tasting his mother's honeypot.
I'll try to finish tonight (Friday, Oct. 20) because I realize you are on deadline.
I'm not used to sending these kinds of things so you may have to help me along in that regard. I know there's a risk in publicizing #s ... 9098626584. Call me if you want, or email me your No. or just email me directions and your Email Address.
Thanx, Dan
This is a great story and I look forward to more chapters but leave dad out. Or if you bring dad into the relationship don't make the men bisexual. Like Philip I wished his sister would have been wearing stockings when he took her virginity.
by
Anonymous11/26/16
YES!!! Leave Dad out.
Loved the story also love the ideas for the other stories you must write. But please leave Dad out and please do not make Phillip bi.
by
Anonymous11/27/16
leave dad out
Best story more please!!!!!!!!
by
Anonymous12/03/16
DO more!
I would love to see the tent swap. Dad could get involved, but please, nothing between Phillip and Dad.
I'm in love. The hidden sex under others noses are the best. Please keep writing this series and if you need another proofreader, editor, or just someone to cum from the story, let me know.
Good, hot story. Well told. Looking forward to a continuation.
by
Anonymous12/26/16
sweet story
all the ideas soung good except the dad one, forget him with the kids, put him with grandma and his wife, maybe his/her sister, that's plenty hot. no gay stuff.
English
More please!!
Please add some more stories to this series.
More please
I would like to see all of the ideas except the family orgy
Anon Ymous
Put me down for a story with the dad!
More!
Fantastic story, you have a gift! I would love to see this evolve in many more stores, including dad takes dick!
Are you insane? Of course you should continue! Great story, can't wait for more.
As Usual
I love everything that you write and I'm always waiting for your next submission. Continue the great work.
Count Me In Too!!
Please continue just as you outlined at the end of the story.
Could be your best series yet!!
More bro/sis
I vote you continue, but with JUST the siblings. I don't care whether or not mom cares, or preferably you continue from an alternate ending where mom never found out. These two siblings have real chemistry, that I would love to see continued without involving anyone else joining.
keep going
I loved it get the whole family in it
family
Yes please continue on as you write great stories and yes start off with the mother,sister and brother go at it when the father goes away for the day.Then have the mother wanting her son by herself in the washroom or somewhere in the house.Then so top it off have the mother and the daughter have the son in the back see on the way home.
Please more!
But if honest I would explore bro and sis together sneaking around slightly helped by mom more and more until you start to bring the rest of the family in.
Love it
I love it when women catch people having sex, we already know what 90% of guys will do (watch or try to join), but it's always interesting to see a woman's reaction to such an event.
But my vote is for the first two: FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY &
FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME
Swapping and Orgy are Ok with me too.
Excellent as usual
My vote is to leave dad out, bt that's just me. I immediately dump any story that hints ANY dad. Sorry just me, that's my vote for a sequel.
Omg
Yes part two and I agree leave dad out and make it mom and daughter and son in the end. But more son and daughter and also son and mom and have daughter spy on them and then join in at a later date.
Swapping tents
Daughter does daddies dick, dummy dad doesnt delineate!
I DEMAND IT!!!,!1111
just wow
Awesome story, looking forward to seeing how you carry this on xxSuexx
Yes please
Yes please write another chapter, any and all of the suggestions would be fabulous!
How stupid must the dad be.
Am I the only one who wants to know how 2 people could be fucking in the back seat and the driver not knowing. HELLO. Have you ever been in this position yourself? There is no way to mask the unmistakeable smell of sex in a motor car and unless both parents had both lost there sense of smell they would have to know just what was happening in the back.
Still, forgetting this lack of detail, the story was inspiring and an OK source of penile stimulation, meaning it caused me to get a fat so it was worth a read but not a 5.
A good twist on the mom/son car ride......yum! So delish! Please continue!
Wow..your story wanting for more...your stories are always a good read. Please continue...but also bring in the aunt and cousins....:)
Outstanding
I love your stories, I hope you continue this one, I actually wish this one was longer, kudos to you!
From what I can see you get the most negative sequel feedback when things are taken too far.
Have you considered having the mother being approving and even helping to cover for them without direct involvement?
Please Continue This Story......
It's a great story and I'd love to see ALL of the suggestions cum to life as only you can tell it.
This was beyond great! Please keep it going!
Need more
You've left the door open perfectly for a sequel. Even if you only write one more, just to get the mother involved. You've gotta do it!
It is difficult for me to imagine........
..............that Mom will accept what she has witnessed as fulfillment of her now ignited and hot trending libido !
Good grief I missed so much way back in the 30's
No cars and little knowledge of what to expect of girls. Now at 85 I am way past all of what I have just been excited about. Well I can dream can't I.
sequal......
I really enjoyed your version of backseat sex... but if you write a sequel, I would like to read about an encounter of these two siblings having loving sex without the cars' backseat location. Perhaps somewhere they can truly show each other how much love they can demonstrate thru (during?) sex but in much more comfortable surroundings.
Hi all
Part 2 is written and almost done editing and will be out later in October.
It is called Bathroom Mommy and even has a bit of a twist.
Jasmine
can't wait for part 2 and more parts! I love most of your stories
additional story idea
Mom decides she needs a ride on her son's big cock...yes, that sounds like a hot continuation on where the car ride story ended. This was an extremely hot scenario.
Hot story
hot and nice story with a surprise ending.
I want a reading of a sequel!
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English is not my native language.
Editing copy, Dan
This part is great and I'm currently working on Part TWO. I've completed editing to the point at which Philip is busy tasting his mother's honeypot.
I'll try to finish tonight (Friday, Oct. 20) because I realize you are on deadline.
I'm not used to sending these kinds of things so you may have to help me along in that regard. I know there's a risk in publicizing #s ... 9098626584. Call me if you want, or email me your No. or just email me directions and your Email Address.
Thanx, Dan
So yummy!
A very yummy story indeed! I like your ideas for the follow on stories too! Thank you!
Very sexy story line
I love this $tory cant wait to read more
Great story.....series?
Excellent story. Can't wait for part 2, 3,4. (hoping)
Great Story
My vote are the two:
FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY
Mom decides she needs a ride on her son's big cock.
FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME
Son pleases Mom & Sister while Dad is away
forget the dad
This is a great story and I look forward to more chapters but leave dad out. Or if you bring dad into the relationship don't make the men bisexual. Like Philip I wished his sister would have been wearing stockings when he took her virginity.
YES!!! Leave Dad out.
Loved the story also love the ideas for the other stories you must write. But please leave Dad out and please do not make Phillip bi.
leave dad out
Best story more please!!!!!!!!
DO more!
I would love to see the tent swap. Dad could get involved, but please, nothing between Phillip and Dad.
And the crowd roars for more..
Please continue this .Awesome story so far .
Brilliant
Funny and hot.
Good one
Read great. Keep it going.
Holy Fuck
That was a really good story. Definetly should make a part two. It even more
Great work!
Please keep it up! Love your work.... can't wait for chapter 2!
Love these types of stories
I'm in love. The hidden sex under others noses are the best. Please keep writing this series and if you need another proofreader, editor, or just someone to cum from the story, let me know.
more
Good, hot story. Well told. Looking forward to a continuation.
sweet story
all the ideas soung good except the dad one, forget him with the kids, put him with grandma and his wife, maybe his/her sister, that's plenty hot. no gay stuff.
Continue please
Any of your suggestions would be greatly appreciated, you did a great job on this one.
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