Curious about what you mean exactly when you said "Almost every time I think it should and write a part 2 I am wrong"? How exactly are you wrong about it? Is it not enjoyable for you to continue storyline you feel are complete or that you have covered what you wanted about them? You really should only continue the story if you want to because writing it would be enjoyable for yourself.
That being said personally and selfishly I would really want you to continue this story line with every idea you mentioned (also please don't leave out the dad he should be able to enjoy both his son and daughter as well). But I agree with some of the other posters suggestion of another brother and sister get together before mom joins in. I would imagine that they would want a little more intimate time together after this unique first time.
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Anonymous07/06/16
Really hot
I showed this to my sister and we started playing the 69 game that night. We have not been caught yet though, We just finished fucking and my sister sucked out the condom, She is very hot and is going to college this fall, I am going to visit her on weekends, No Mom yet. Not sure that would fly but she and Dad have split so my sister and I have talked about telling her and offering a three way when she comes home for Thanksgiving,
We would like you to continue but for obvious reasons leave Dad out lol.
All of the possible story episode look great. I would not be interested in a father-son episode as that is not my thing. let us know when you may be introducing all the other themes for sequels
I think that you should continue the story. They're on a camping trip and that could allow for a very satisfying scene. Maybe they share a tent and it storms out. This would mask the sounds of them having sex. Having a situation where they can take their time and see more of each other would be very arousing. Maybe you could have the mom trying to secretly and quietly masterbate while trying to figure out how she might be able to join in. Thanks for the great story and for helping me imagine what might happen next.
Hello, even if there are many stories of that kind already written, I wish you to continue this story. The plot is good, your writing of their mutual feelings is very good, very sensitive and sensual. I suggest you to write part 2 about the "bathroom mommy" and part 3 about the swapping tents.
Keep on like this, your story and writing are great and make this story about a well-known theme an excellent one in this kind of story.
First off I love your stories. but consider this before you write part 2. In this story you had written that both the Brother and sister LOVED each other. All to often people write great stories like this, and say the characters fall in ,or are in, love with each other, but in the next chapter these same characters are fucking other people. While this may be all well and good for some peoples relationships IRL. It takes place all to often in these stories. Instead please continue on with the story (or other future tales) with the sex focusing on just the main characters and the relationship.
I would go with "FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY" as the next part. I agree with another comment that the bro/sis should be the central romance, but the subtext between the mother and son at the end of this one is a plot thread that needs resolved. I don't really see much dad/daughter subtext, especially with such a clueless father, so I would keep clear of that.
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Anonymous07/09/16
Family Affair: Tent Swapping
Maybe have it as a stand alone too!
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Anonymous07/10/16
Needed more skin
I gave it a 2 for the contest--not enough nudity--actually zero. But for a monthly story it deserves about a 4.5
I'd like this to continue. There's some reason their mother was so passe about the whole thing and helped cover it up. Either she's had the hots for her son for a while...and maybe her daughter too, or she had a similar experience with her older brother. I could see this family moving into full-on incest with not much trouble. And maybe adding an uncle and an aunt.
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Anonymous07/10/16
Do anything except the father turning gay. Story was good though
Definitely needs a follow up - personal favourite would be 'FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME'...
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Anonymous07/11/16
Recycled plot
To much of last year's Backseat Mommy: A Long Hard Ride. You are a great writer so don't recycle ideas.
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Anonymous07/11/16
More Please!
Love your writing and would be eager to read more on this family!
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Anonymous07/12/16
Mom rides in the back on the way home, on son's lap
For part 2, have Mom ride in the back with her son, as they have bought so much stuff, that there is no other place for her to ride...besides, sis wants mom to enjoy herself too!
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Anonymous07/13/16
wow great storie
yah I would love to have you wright a second part to this now that mom know what is going on she needs to be in the next story with the brother and sister in some way. I think this could be a real big story if you so choos to make it that way I would love if you did . I score this at a 10
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Anonymous07/14/16
Write Them All
Write all the Family Affair stories - they'll get 5 * just like this one!!
Keep going this is awesome love your writing style one of my all time favorite stories keep it between the son and other female family members
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Anonymous07/15/16
Mom sequel
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Anonymous07/15/16
Don't go crazy
Further the sister until she leaves for college and then let mom slip in for a few before sis comes home for the holidays. Sis has a few boy-toys at college but finds she needs to be with her bro and him only. Sis gets a great job far from home as he gets a good gig in the same town - they become defacto married for a few years with mom's knowledge and dad's ignorance - until family time..... Awkward times when visitng grandma/pa at home with kids.... And a next-door melding old bible thumping bitch calls social services due to who the kids call mom & dad on a Christmas visit.
Just keep it plausible - no weird wacko unlikely's.
not to big on the idea of involving the dad. furthering the relationship with the sister is a good idea. so is dding the mom. bathroom mommy and crazy threesome is a good start
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Bathroom mommy for sure
Bathroom mommy forsure
2 stars should have been 4
Liked it, please continue with mommy and sister and cum inside their pussies, they need it.
Continue
Please continue.
crazy threesome
i would love to see mom and daughter with son while dad is away. mom didn't get mad so she's probably thinking i got to get me some of that dick.
A family orgy by all means
Extend the fun to the rest of the family, but he should father his sisters'child
Please continue. I enjoy your writings.
Loved the story hope chapter 2 will bring mom together with brother and sister
please continue
please continue
bathroom mom
Please continue into this one.. I prefer stories that are one on one..
Definitely Continue
Option 3 Dad Takes Dick too
Please continue
Make the mom join in too
id say mom and daughter tag team son/brother and leave dad to be included later on if you decide to expand.
Don't add dad.
Good story. Don't add dad, keep it secret from him. It's good to have something to fear... getting caught.
more
I'd like to see options 1, 2, 5, 6 and 7 happen and include the Auntie and maybe the father fucking his mother and being joined by his daughter
Leave dad out of it. Options 1,2 4 & 6 sound good. Your backseat mommy series was pretty good so maybe that should be a tired and true formula.
All of the above please?
All of the above
Any of those ideas for more chapters would be great. Would especially enjoy Dad Takes Dick Too.
continuation
Bathroom Mommy works for me...
Sister
Fucking the sister is great.
Please continue...
My vote is for:
FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME
Son pleases Mom & Sister while Dad is away
Please write more.
I vote for the crazy threesome as the sequel.
More
Mom with Son and Mom + Sister and Mom + Sister + Son.
Dad should not be included actively. Passive like this one. Story was hot!
First mommy and then threesome
No Dad please
story ideas
First, I would like to see another story between Brother and sister THEN a story between son and Mom.
Continue story
Continue the story, however I'm not that interested in the Dad+Son thread but the others sound great
No second part
Keep it here. It is hot enough
Please continue
Curious about what you mean exactly when you said "Almost every time I think it should and write a part 2 I am wrong"? How exactly are you wrong about it? Is it not enjoyable for you to continue storyline you feel are complete or that you have covered what you wanted about them? You really should only continue the story if you want to because writing it would be enjoyable for yourself.
That being said personally and selfishly I would really want you to continue this story line with every idea you mentioned (also please don't leave out the dad he should be able to enjoy both his son and daughter as well). But I agree with some of the other posters suggestion of another brother and sister get together before mom joins in. I would imagine that they would want a little more intimate time together after this unique first time.
Really hot
I showed this to my sister and we started playing the 69 game that night. We have not been caught yet though, We just finished fucking and my sister sucked out the condom, She is very hot and is going to college this fall, I am going to visit her on weekends, No Mom yet. Not sure that would fly but she and Dad have split so my sister and I have talked about telling her and offering a three way when she comes home for Thanksgiving,
We would like you to continue but for obvious reasons leave Dad out lol.
continue fm affair story line
All of the possible story episode look great. I would not be interested in a father-son episode as that is not my thing. let us know when you may be introducing all the other themes for sequels
Continuation idea
I think that you should continue the story. They're on a camping trip and that could allow for a very satisfying scene. Maybe they share a tent and it storms out. This would mask the sounds of them having sex. Having a situation where they can take their time and see more of each other would be very arousing. Maybe you could have the mom trying to secretly and quietly masterbate while trying to figure out how she might be able to join in. Thanks for the great story and for helping me imagine what might happen next.
great story, you can continue
Hello, even if there are many stories of that kind already written, I wish you to continue this story. The plot is good, your writing of their mutual feelings is very good, very sensitive and sensual. I suggest you to write part 2 about the "bathroom mommy" and part 3 about the swapping tents.
Keep on like this, your story and writing are great and make this story about a well-known theme an excellent one in this kind of story.
Continue please
Yes please do continue - All the options sound good except the father liking dick
Before part 2 consider this....
First off I love your stories. but consider this before you write part 2. In this story you had written that both the Brother and sister LOVED each other. All to often people write great stories like this, and say the characters fall in ,or are in, love with each other, but in the next chapter these same characters are fucking other people. While this may be all well and good for some peoples relationships IRL. It takes place all to often in these stories. Instead please continue on with the story (or other future tales) with the sex focusing on just the main characters and the relationship.
FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY
I would go with "FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY" as the next part. I agree with another comment that the bro/sis should be the central romance, but the subtext between the mother and son at the end of this one is a plot thread that needs resolved. I don't really see much dad/daughter subtext, especially with such a clueless father, so I would keep clear of that.
Family Affair: Tent Swapping
Maybe have it as a stand alone too!
Needed more skin
I gave it a 2 for the contest--not enough nudity--actually zero. But for a monthly story it deserves about a 4.5
I'd like this to continue. There's some reason their mother was so passe about the whole thing and helped cover it up. Either she's had the hots for her son for a while...and maybe her daughter too, or she had a similar experience with her older brother. I could see this family moving into full-on incest with not much trouble. And maybe adding an uncle and an aunt.
Do anything except the father turning gay. Story was good though
Follow up
Definitely needs a follow up - personal favourite would be 'FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME'...
Recycled plot
To much of last year's Backseat Mommy: A Long Hard Ride. You are a great writer so don't recycle ideas.
More Please!
Love your writing and would be eager to read more on this family!
Mom rides in the back on the way home, on son's lap
For part 2, have Mom ride in the back with her son, as they have bought so much stuff, that there is no other place for her to ride...besides, sis wants mom to enjoy herself too!
wow great storie
yah I would love to have you wright a second part to this now that mom know what is going on she needs to be in the next story with the brother and sister in some way. I think this could be a real big story if you so choos to make it that way I would love if you did . I score this at a 10
Write Them All
Write all the Family Affair stories - they'll get 5 * just like this one!!
No Dad
Don't add the dad, just keep the son
No dad, amazing story
Keep going this is awesome love your writing style one of my all time favorite stories keep it between the son and other female family members
Mom sequel
Don't go crazy
Further the sister until she leaves for college and then let mom slip in for a few before sis comes home for the holidays. Sis has a few boy-toys at college but finds she needs to be with her bro and him only. Sis gets a great job far from home as he gets a good gig in the same town - they become defacto married for a few years with mom's knowledge and dad's ignorance - until family time..... Awkward times when visitng grandma/pa at home with kids.... And a next-door melding old bible thumping bitch calls social services due to who the kids call mom & dad on a Christmas visit.
Just keep it plausible - no weird wacko unlikely's.
not to big on the idea of involving the dad. furthering the relationship with the sister is a good idea. so is dding the mom. bathroom mommy and crazy threesome is a good start
Definitely room to progress to involve other members
This was a nice quick read, though can't quite figure out how he got on his knees in the back seat without his dad seeing him ... or maybe he did!
Sequence should be
Mom and Son
Threesome (son, daughter and mom)
Swapping Tents.
I would not mind the fishing story (hint! hint!)
P.S. Love all your stories, especially your Turning Stories.
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