Lily’s Anal Curiosity

I really enjoyed your writing! The mixture of medical and anal fetish was absolutely perfect. I do have to admit though, in the beginning I was really excited for a very "medical" take on the whole experience as that's a thing of mine, but I like the direction you chose to take it in!

What a HOT HOT HOT story!

WOW...sensual and sublime...clinical in the best way all at the same time. VERY well done! I am going to have to read all your stories!

really good

Your writing is exceptional.. You took a clinical situations and made it sensual!

Excellent

Very well written, look forward to many more interesting stories from you

Great story we acted it out

This is an intensely written vivid story! We have a little kink group where one of our pleasurable activities is to get together and have one of us read a Literotica tale. The person who reads it should play the role of the major character in the story. Eventually if people are aroused enough then we indulge in some pleasure play. For this story one of our group members, a college freshman beauty, played the role of Lily. A pregnant milf played the role of Elizabeth. She undressed Lily as Lily read, and then licked her pussy area thoroughly. I played the doctor who massaged Lily's pussy deeply and slowly. She was dripping cum heavily and stopped her reading to moan uncontrollably at times. It was a lot of fun. Great story!

Amazing!

You managed to take a situation that is generally handled with spectacular vulgarity and make it powerfully erotic. Well done!

Anonymous

I came extremely nicely...

Well played! Some stories give it up in the beginning, but this one fired all the major shots at the end - and so did I. The foreplay was nice and inventive, but the sex was awesome, I really felt it going in. And I am no stranger to the dark love. Sweet poetry, thank you! :)

this is awesome

This is something different than all the other anal stories out there. Also very beautifully written. This will be one of my favorites

Second Best Ever

It would be difficult to eclipse your rump-ranging tale, Jessica's Anal Curiosity, but you have come very close to it. Maybe it's only because JAC was the very first Lit story I can remember reading.

One thing is for sure, the idea was incredibly novel. With the brilliantly rendered reparté between Lily and Miranda the story just bristled with deadpan humor and a beguiling, matter-of-fact eroticism. Bravo.

What a great effort.

OK now.

Very nicely done. I think that you could have put her comments upon viewing the video into the story. It might have been an interesting addition, possibly having her orgasm while watching and remembering.