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by Anonymous

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by YDD04/11/04

Page 3

Should we know where to find the story?
Developmentally introspective.

I like the opening line:
"In the summer fever of belief,"

It is a season all too passing.

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by Tathagata04/11/04

Ahhh

Now I see
must have been a very odd feeling.....
But I think you'd be worth the " digging"
but I'd promise not st stare
: )

Thanks for this
another layer falls away

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