Not much of a story.
This was really good for a first time story. Very believable.
Not explicit enough for me. More like romance novel story, here we get the dirty details
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Poor
Not much of a story.
liked it
This was really good for a first time story. Very believable.
Nice one
Not explicit enough for me. More like romance novel story, here we get the dirty details
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