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My Max's First

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/04/16

Poor

Not much of a story.

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by Anonymous09/19/16

liked it

This was really good for a first time story. Very believable.

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by Anonymous09/22/16

Nice one

Not explicit enough for me. More like romance novel story, here we get the dirty details

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