All Comments on 'Velvet's Hansel & Gretel'

by velvetpie

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onyxessenceonyxessenceover 15 years ago
Sexy but gross

It was so good at first then got unexpectedly nasty at the end. Way too gory and bloody for an erotic story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I fucking came so hard. Love lesbian sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Loved this story. Your reinterpretation is quite brilliant. I'd love to see you tackle other fairytales. Thank you for your terrific writings.

OseekerOseeker6 months ago

Well, different anyway....

2 stars for your efforts....

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