All Comments on 'Hotwire me, Lover!'

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Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 8 years ago
Attagal....

Mer !!! 5-ed.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 8 years ago

I like this version, Mer.

AngelineAngelinealmost 8 years ago
Short but not short on innuendo!

Good extended metaphor keeps the poem cohesive and consistently erotic! I 5ed it. :-)

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