A Bike for a Bang!

Fantastic Style

Such a refreshing twist for this genre. I love the literary and pop culture references. I'm waiting for the squeal to be titled "Revenge of the cacti." :)

Squeal huh? I think you had a freudian slip there with one of your Femdom fantasies my dearest ;).

Thank you.

I just wanted to thank everyone who did take the time to vote or give feedback. Be assured that for an aspiring author every reader counts and every input is humbly acknowledged. Every single one of you is gratefully noticed.

Rosa sends her greetings as well. She is already up to the neck in her next adventure. Alons y.

Great fun!

Congratulations on your entry. I like the voice and the playfulness of the piece. It could have used a bit more editing (for example, thumps -> thumbs, twice!) Also I wondered about your choice of words once in a while - early on in the story, did you mean "induce minds" or did you actually mean "seduce minds"? No matter, the overall read was enjoyable enough for a 5* vote.

Re: Choice of words I am no English native so I am very careful about what kind of expressions I use. If I write something it is researched and double checked. So yes I did mean induce. :)

As for the missed typos. I am blaming my Editor, cause I really really want that spanking she promised me.

Thanks for voting ~