24 Exeter Place

Diction

I think "semen" would match the diction and setting of your story better than "cum."

Try Again

Sorry, I don't believe that Englishmen who lay with men in 1890 would use the clinical term "semen" in conversation. They are more likely to use "seed," and then clinically be incorrect (and then if I used that word some nitpicker would jump on me for that). But it's true that "cum" didn't start to appear as a noun until 1920, although "come" as a verb in this context goes back to 1650. I wouldn't share your objection to the use of "cum" in this piece enough to comment on that--and only that--about the story, but feel free, if it remains important to you, to come up with a believable word that Englishmen of the 1890s would use and that wouldn't give unnecessary pause to a twenty-first-century reader.

Great Set and Setting

Really enjoyed this period piece!

Lovely

Imaginative tale, well told. Change out a couple anachronistic words ('glitterati') and a nearly flawless story. Inviting, evocative, sensual.

love it

I like period pieces, very raw sex.

I need more chapters to this story please