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YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Whether three Hiawatha

The cadence is hard to not fall into. The images are strong, the words fresh. - Well done.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Wow... this one danced....

the best of the echoing 4 I think, excellent meter and rhyme flowed so naturally. I loved the repetition like a shaman's chant. Very good...

jim : )

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