All Comments on 'My Sister's Rapist'

ABSOLUTELY OUTSTANDING! A FANTASTIC STORY! And at heart, its the truth...

a good story, alot of women cant face things

Good story... contraversial... As a fellow writer I applaud you for pushing the envelope but I am a little concerned by the other comments here. I address the following to those posters:

Think what you like about women, but as someone who has both fantasised about rape and actually been raped, I can assure you there is a major difference between fantasy and reality. With a fantasy, however much you long to lose control, to be controlled, what happens is up to you, and it is up to you when you stop. When you're raped, you're raped.

I don't want to deny you your fantasies, but please don't lose sight of that.

This is a very well known and established female fantasy and there ARE statistics about women having RAPE on top of their sexual fantasies list.

Beautifuly described.

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I don't find this story erotic in the least. Well written? Yeah okay. Pretty good. Get a hardon? Pffft. Not likely.

Your writing style is excellent and that is what makes this story entertaining. I'm impressed and eager to read more.

Well written story , capturing the imagination and usage of NLP.

Hello, just a quick word to all of you. This story is like fire, and when you play with fire you might get burned. Rape is something that is wrong, always and forever. There are no excuses and no exceptions. However men and women alike will not stop having mutual fantasies about the 'possibility' of rape. Its a powerfull emotion that walks a fine line. This story walks it, and I believe walks it well. Our main character is both turned on and repulsed at the same time, but makes the RIGHT decision by the end. I expect all of you to make the right decisions in your lives as well. Thank you for reading my story and be well.

why didn't you somehow have him get loose and rape the other sister as well?

This was a well written story with constant banter between the rapist and the sister. Neither wanting to give ground. The rapist being behind glass lost the battle because, man act out aggressively, while women use that rapier, which are there mouths. Very few men can out talk women without trying trying to put their hands on them.

Wow this guy pissed me off yet at the same time i'm strangly aroused. I'm not one for rape but the idea of having angry sex with that guy, and then ripping his balls off when i'm done arouses my darkest fantasies.

:P good job!

This was a unique story. I enjoyed it, even though I didn't find it arousing. Sometimes I browse the stories and just read them out of boredom, and this one was certainly different than any other I've read.

The rapist raised some interesting points about the way our legal system works now. This story made me think. That is rare for Lit. Excellent work.

There is absolutely nothing erotic about this story. I don't have time to read such crap.

This story is so long and drawn out, it's annoying. I kept saying to myself, "Oh get to the point already!" as I was reading it.

Totally unerotic.

I'm confused cause the sister said that her sister spent a week in the hospital. The guy said that they just fucked. I kind of believed him over the sister, but the hospital thing didn't make sense. Where did all this hospitalization come from? He'd had to have beat the hell out of the girl but that never came up in his recounting and his personality seemed like the type to mention it.

By the way, my favorite story by Phoenix Arrow is Wrong Number - that was amazing!!!

I like your style, but use of capslock always makes me wince. It's hard, as I used to use it all the fucking time, but if you ween yourself off of it, your stories will improve as a result.

Keep on truckin', mang.

omg goood story i knew she was wet cause i was!!!!!!!!!!!

Well written (except the wet spot in the end ruined it a bit for me). I HATE such men who think that a physical reaction of lubrication is a green light to do whatever they want to a woman. Self-serving bastards. Rape is rape, nonconsent is nonconsent.

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