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Someone who can actually write!
It's a simple vignette, but AmiKerrigan captures the emotion, experience, and even personality of her protagonist. Nice use of language and imagery without cliche. As a reader you feel both the eroticism of the situation and the disgust. Nicely done.
First rate! I love your take on her conflicted emotions. Very sexy. Thanks for posting.
very well written
I am not that big on the BJ theme but the sorry is very very written.
Really well-written!
I hope there is a "next game!"
Wow
The best story I've read on here in years. Holy shit.
Excellent writing. You take us inside Ami's mind and emotions as she is honoring her wager -- a wonderful example of showing, not telling. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Excellent!
I'll look forward to the next chapter!
Amazing
The best story that I have read in a very long time. Articulate and beautiful writing. Look forward to many more.
Great story!
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