All Comments on 'A Lady in Red'

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AnnoraAnnoraalmost 20 years ago
SPECTACULAR

One more layer peeled for us to adore...Layer by layer you give us much enjoyment.

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
Uncomplicated verse...

and some interesting artwork. Very nice.

jim : )

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Like

the rhyme in this... simple and highly effectual.

all ladies should wear red ;)

Senna JawaSenna Jawaalmost 20 years ago
trivial, tasteless graphics

and trivial, puerile text.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I'm sorry

It is completely terrible. Childish, sing-song rhythm, unintelligent, lacking in depth, poorly executed. Tasteless image. Utterly reprehensible. I apologize, but it's true.

ficton_masterficton_masterover 19 years ago
Good

This is good. I would like to see it a little longer, perhaps alittle more at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
good

very good ~

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
What?

'she is pleasing to my head'?!!! Monumentally dreadful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Sorry...

Sorry...This is shit. This is not a good poem. It is simplistic, and uninteresting. Sorry, gotta be honest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Is the joke on me?

I'm still trying to figure out if you are really serious in submitting this or if you're trying to see how many people will actually read all three verses and compliment you on it. I am not one of them. It's juvenile, bland, meaningless, and between the nursery rhyme and that ridiculous picture it reminds me of an '80's condom ad.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Anticipation.

No quaint words ~ the guy's wife is wearing red ~ he can't wait to get into bed...Okay! is this to be continued - or what? Stirs the sensuous imagination.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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These gals that we wed can sure turn us to putty.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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These gals that we wed can sure turn us to putty.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Very effective...

with a tasty little graphic....

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
you know...

red is my favorite color!

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
WHILE OTHERS AWAIT

the rest dread. TK U MLJ LV NV

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