All Comments on 'Hide In The Sun'

Don't know what it is about the word labia that is so erotic...Does it for me every time.hehehehe...nice story Alex.

Thank you. Really enjoyed your writing.

Good story Alex I enjoyed it

It's the real to life qualities that I like about this story. No bull, no pretence, just good people beginning a relationship.

I am truly impressed! Please take a moment to check out a few of my submissions -- I could use the feedback! :) Excellent story Alex, keep them coming!

Alex,

Congratulations on another fine ADK production. Imaginative setting, good physical descriptions, a nice little twist at the end and some dialogue that could be a how-to teaching aide. I'm really curious which of your two stories will get the higher score.

A very nice short-story. That is my only complaint - too short. No chance to get to know the characters and/or follow the building relationship.

No complaints, though - great little story.

which contest you entered and how successful you were. It seems very strange that you authors write so well (especially Alex) and get such little recognition or thanks for your efforts. Over 7 years since this story was submitted and this is only the 8th comment! And nearly 29000 reads. Why can't people show some gratitude? Well, I enjoyed it! And, I enjoy the variety of your work, the many different situations that all could be real since the detail and the little things make them that way. Your characters are horny and uninhibited and ready to "get it on" and that allows the story to develop quickly but completely. Well, enough of the story is told to make it interesting, erotic, and complete, yet not so complete that all of your stories could be continued and expanded. You have real talent, and I appreciate what you provide for us!