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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve04/19/04

words

I really love the words, but they were a little hard to read in a few spots.

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by Liar04/20/04

elegant

I love the looks of this poem, wonderful color and typography construction. And the words are great. But, like Eve, I say words, because they were a bit too scattered to be read easily. I found myself lsing track of a few lines. I think I got it right at last, bit I'm still not 100% sure...

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by YDD04/20/04

I don't see it

If you are using more than one font or type effect to generate several different ways to read your words then my monitor will not display the differences clearly enough to discern them.

If you are not, then "havetos" and "tickilng" appear to be errors.

In either case I do not see what is accomplished by the background. Do I need a new monitor?

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by jthserra04/20/04

Words well fitted to the art...

so well expressed. Very good.

jim : )

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by duddle14612/31/06

Strange

Words appeared jumbled together ~ hard to read.

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by LeBroz02/09/07

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Not at all hard to read, just too jammed together and YDD's points ought also to be taken under advisement.

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by Amyfriend02/12/07

Very different...

with a colorful illustration..

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by Amyfriend02/12/07

Very different...

with a colorful illustration..

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by tazz31704/17/12

WATCH WHAT INSANITY

hears from unseen voices. TK U MLJ LV NV

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