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It Begins Pt. 01: Hot Tub

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by Anonymous07/23/16

ending it here was wrong.

Its just starting to get to the juicy part. Why would you end it here? I don't think any one cares if its late. This story is hot, and needs more than 2 pages for a chapter.

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