All Comments on 'Stacy's First Swing Pt. 03'

Not much of a plot here and didn't get me horny sorry. Three stars for a good effort. Plot is everything, even in an erotic story, So many novice writers don't get it. There must be three acts: action in act 1 giving us the bones of the plot, conflict in act 2, and resolution in act 3.

This scenes was ruined for me you making Jared tasting that guy's on Stacey's fingers....; I am not into MM/ at least announce that at the beginning for those of us who are not in that kind of stuff.