Home Alone

WTF...

For a start, there is no incest here. Second, if this writer is 23 yo or more, he has missed a lot. He should talk to his parents and ask them to tell him about the birds and the bees.

Pretty basic...

I'm thankful that it was short, otherwise I wouldn't have bothered to finish it.

Lacking a bit

This was lacking a bit. Ok, it kinda sucked.

Waste of time

With the list of sex aids the parents had, this read more like a sex shop catalogue than a story.
And why was it in the incest section?

11 paragraphs and you call this a story?

Home Alone

No stars for this one.
No scanner either, eh?
you poor wasted cocksplat.
And those are the good points.
"I" tits?

Good Start

For whatever my opinion is worth, I'd encourage you to ignore the negative opinions posted earlier by others and expand this with a further chapter or more where the son is invited into the fun by his horny and kinky parents. You've described a very arousing introduction which I found to be well-written, and would love to see more. :D

Amazing how people refuse to look outside their ignorance

Yes there are I size bra's. It is a measurement used in Europe. It measures roughly the same as the F and G sizes in the US.

The story had a solid premise and was very realistic. The flow was a little choppy but I liked it. Not sure it really counted as incest since there was no sexual contact between family members but not bad.

Good start

Regardless of negative comments your story can be picked up by having him walk in and finding his Mom getting fucked by the guy next door. Things can certainly increase from there. Mom Son oral anal etc.

re: Good Start

Don't ya just love people who can't just post their thoughts on a story but have to trash others for daring to have a different opinion?

Yeah, this is the person to listen to.

I agree with delawaredog

This is a very good start by a first time young author in his early 20s. Say the boy comes home and finds his mother getting her brains fucked loose by some neighbor. Seeing the hairy hole between his own mother's thighs, the same hole the kid came out of, makes his young cock so hard it's practically busting out of his pants. After mom's friend shoots his load up her well-exercised cunt, her son goes for sloppy seconds. Mom welcomes her baby boy back up inside her, baby boy pumps away like crazy, and ends by blowing his young balls and splattering his great big load of semen up his own damn birth canal! The fondest dream of lots and lots of sons, including me.

Good short story

Some sons have made unexpected discoveries about mom's sexuality. It really changes perspective. Best line of story "I cummed buckets full."

ignore the haters

You have amazing potential as a writer, and to the idiots I sized bras is the measurements in Europe. I can see this going longer, maybe he fucks his slut mommy? Keep working at it :D

Promising

Not a real fan of pegging, but the opportunity to turn the parents and the adult son into an incestuous kinky threesome does have some promise.

good start and there's plenty of room for many chapters to come. I would have said great start but the short length made it less so. I will give you a few tips:
1. longer chapters allow your readers to get into the world you're creating before the chapter ends. It also has a direct impact on the score, longer chapters always score better. If you find you can't write the chapters longer, then submit two chapters as one submission.

2. Don't change the story contents leave what you have put in place and roll with it. You can add more as each story goes on, but don't listen to any negative about the pegging, swinging, or the like. It's a nice story and keep going and have fun with it.

Flying start

Off to a flying start. Love that the Mom is a chubby redhead with big tits, love the sex toy discoveries such as dildos, slut clothes and chastity device for dad, and finding pics. Don't blow it by instantly getting him to fuck his mum. Draw it out so he continues being a voyeur to her kinky sex. Get him to smell her panties and suck her pussy juices off her dildos while trying not to be caught. Also, I think it is fine that his dad has a monster cock, but I find it boring when the son does. Give him and average or below average dick and you can play with a strong humiliation angle - maybe mom is a size queen and he realises he couldn't handle her or wounldn't measure up to her needs. Also, please don't do that thing of insisting his Mom is totally perfect with an ultra tight pussy that looks like it belongs to an 18yo virgin. She's a mature woman who gave birth and has a very active sexlife and her husband has a monster dick. Her vagina is going to be a stretched out gaping mess and her huge tits are going to be very saggy (nothing wrong with that). Add enough reality and inject some interesting psychology and the next chapter could be dynamite!

Parent perspective

My grown son has found my equipment in our bedroom. So I enjoyed your story from the dad's angle. There's a strange and arousing pride for me, knowing that he knows a few things about how I fuck. You took me into those thoughts nicely. Thanks.