This story line has been pretty good, but this last installment seems to have been a bit rushed. Perhaps you were ready for it to end so you could move to another story...I don't know. good storyline, but I felt a bit left hanging by the lack of plot development and lack of detail in this installment.
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Last one, but a bit rushed?
This story line has been pretty good, but this last installment seems to have been a bit rushed. Perhaps you were ready for it to end so you could move to another story...I don't know. good storyline, but I felt a bit left hanging by the lack of plot development and lack of detail in this installment.
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