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by Anonymous

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by Maria239404/13/04

I'm almost sure

that jimmy is smiling from waaay up there on his beautiful cloud :) Beautiful poem, Boo

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by YDD04/13/04

A Tohmas Wolfe moment

A soft and wistful remembrance of a love too long lost to finality.

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by jthserra04/15/04

Very nice sonnet...

a couple of metric breaks (if I scan correctly) but they are not obtrusive and certainly don't affect the poem. An unobtrusive rhyme strengthened it. Very good.

jim : )

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by BooMerengue04/15/04

oh

thank you, Jim! At least someone noticed! Now I can breathe a little easier! Thanks!

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