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Hope
what a wonderful way to look at the world..thank you :)
It makes sense to me.
Lovely, Lin. Another winner.
uplifting
I can feel the hope of spring,
Hush now.
It's only
A moment of the season.
Lovely.
So obvious
There is a de-facto feeling over many poems you write, a sense of that what you say is the most natural thing in the world. You can take the simple beauty of a concept and just show it like it is, in a way that few poets can. Thanks for once again warming my day.
Soft and warm world view
This poem displays the gentle sense of Gaia unfolding herself to all new life.
Or of a proud mother showing the world to her babe in spring.
I find it warmly enlightening.
This poet has talent to further explore.
I might change "hollering".
Everything
I said in "new poems" Lin. Very breathtaking and beautiful
A beautiful poem...
for a first Easter... such a gentle expression in the words, so nurturing. well done...
jim : )
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