by Linbido
I can feel the hope of spring,
Hush now.
It's only
A moment of the season.
Lovely.
There is a de-facto feeling over many poems you write, a sense of that what you say is the most natural thing in the world. You can take the simple beauty of a concept and just show it like it is, in a way that few poets can. Thanks for once again warming my day.
This poem displays the gentle sense of Gaia unfolding herself to all new life.
Or of a proud mother showing the world to her babe in spring.
I find it warmly enlightening.
This poet has talent to further explore.
I might change "hollering".
for a first Easter... such a gentle expression in the words, so nurturing. well done...
jim : )