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by Anonymous

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by Maria239404/13/04

Hope

what a wonderful way to look at the world..thank you :)

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by 04/13/04

It makes sense to me.

Lovely, Lin. Another winner.

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by champagne198204/13/04

uplifting

I can feel the hope of spring,
Hush now.
It's only
A moment of the season.

Lovely.

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by Liar04/14/04

So obvious

There is a de-facto feeling over many poems you write, a sense of that what you say is the most natural thing in the world. You can take the simple beauty of a concept and just show it like it is, in a way that few poets can. Thanks for once again warming my day.

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by YDD04/14/04

Soft and warm world view

This poem displays the gentle sense of Gaia unfolding herself to all new life.
Or of a proud mother showing the world to her babe in spring.
I find it warmly enlightening.
This poet has talent to further explore.

I might change "hollering".

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by echoes_s04/14/04

Everything

I said in "new poems" Lin. Very breathtaking and beautiful

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by jthserra04/15/04

A beautiful poem...

for a first Easter... such a gentle expression in the words, so nurturing. well done...

jim : )

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