I sincerely hope that your book that you are publishing is a whole lot better than your story...
Part one wasnt' to bad, but this one sucked from the minute you began. Since when if she is in a car do they talk as if they are on instant message? It would be conversation. I am surprised the editors didn't pick it up. shame on them! I am sorry to say i will not look for future works from you, you lost my interest. Jane
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Anonymous04/19/04
What an officious oaf
I can appreciate the eroticism of such an enounter if handled right. However, I see nothing sexy about an officer behaving like a control freak, and abusing the privliages accorded to an officer of the law.
Sorry for the low ranking
1. It was great
2. who cares how she wrote them speaking I didn't want to read he stood in the car window and said" blah, blah blah,
I wanted to get to the fucking thats what PORN WRITERS DO!I read this comments and they are really stupid.
English
yikes
I sincerely hope that your book that you are publishing is a whole lot better than your story...
Part one wasnt' to bad, but this one sucked from the minute you began. Since when if she is in a car do they talk as if they are on instant message? It would be conversation. I am surprised the editors didn't pick it up. shame on them! I am sorry to say i will not look for future works from you, you lost my interest. Jane
What an officious oaf
I can appreciate the eroticism of such an enounter if handled right. However, I see nothing sexy about an officer behaving like a control freak, and abusing the privliages accorded to an officer of the law.
Sorry for the low ranking
WHOOOHOOOOO BABY
1. It was great
2. who cares how she wrote them speaking I didn't want to read he stood in the car window and said" blah, blah blah,
I wanted to get to the fucking thats what PORN WRITERS DO!I read this comments and they are really stupid.
WET
SOAKING WET
wonderful
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