by Erotica_Writings
The story wasn't weak just the mind of the person posting their stupid comments, don't you know what a short story is?
short story? if you edited it and deleted the grammar mistakes you would have about 3 sentences left.
I dont why some People are complaining?
Unless they are Writers themselfs and have written much better then this!I thought it was good
I love all of your works. You get better with each new story. Like a fine wine. you just get better with age...
This is a hot and sexy story. Its a bit short, but you will love to read it.