All Comments on 'Just Once More'

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angel4u2lust4angel4u2lust4about 20 years ago
its a great short story

The story wasn't weak just the mind of the person posting their stupid comments, don't you know what a short story is?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
edits necessary

short story? if you edited it and deleted the grammar mistakes you would have about 3 sentences left.

dsidedsideabout 20 years ago
It was OK

I guess, but it wasn't long enough to really be sure.

Mikki69Mikki69almost 20 years ago
good short story

The story did its magic on my panties, mmm soaking wet

Papa-JoePapa-Joealmost 20 years ago
Great ,for a short Story

I dont why some People are complaining?

Unless they are Writers themselfs and have written much better then this!I thought it was good

Whispering_Wolf57Whispering_Wolf57almost 20 years ago
Itssssssssss Greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat

I love all of your works. You get better with each new story. Like a fine wine. you just get better with age...

DebonaireloverDebonaireloveralmost 20 years ago
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you make me so horny

ScribblerosScribblerosalmost 20 years ago
Hot story chaps!

This is a hot and sexy story. Its a bit short, but you will love to read it.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

hot hot pussy

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