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It's finally back and it's packing drama
So very nice to see this one back in all its glory! The start did confuse me a bit until I realised it was just a random girl, guess their frolicking was good for something and someone. The rest might be the usual proceedings between M&J but it revealed yet more details of their everyday lives as well as more details on what drives Jenny in her more intimate aspects. But then the drama of Marks father just had to be brought up and their first fight ensued, she had the chance to drop it but now she'll have to carrie the consequences of her actions. Despite the seriousness of it all I hope it'll get resolved quickly and peacefully so that we can all enjoy the romantic bliss some more.
This one gets another 5*, just like the rest of the series.
And thanks for lot letting us hang while you were gone, the rest of the stories were just as spectacular!
thanks
for keeping it going
The reason for Tina's story . . .
. . . was to just change things up a bit. I wanted to use that part, but thought of changing the perspective.
In the very first chapter, the first alternate was going to be Jennifer's story, but then it occurred to me to use an outside observer, Monica, Jen's roommate; I wasn't sure that I could have done that segment from Jennifer's perspective and done it well, because Jennifer was so shy.
Eucharistic vs Liturgical
Eucharistic Ministers help the priest with the passing out communion. Liturgical Ministers do the first two readings for the Mass. I am a Eucharistic minister at my church and I hope they would never want me to do readings,
Please…keep them together
Maybe Mark can give a bit of an explanation so that Jen knows.. and maybe Jen can be careful and gentle in her discussions. We have come too far to have them fall apart. Please keep them loving each other and together!
in awe
I am constantly amazed at how well you can work such emotion into such few words. I will read whatever you decide to post. know that I am a fan.
-Ahaz
more?
hey r there gonna be more chapters to this?
ive been reading "my number" as youve added chapters to that story, but im really hoping youve got more to this one
more
Cliffhanger ending, and you already told us they do wind up married. When is the next installment?
Oh my God!
First fight and the story is not continued?
What happened?
I hope the author is well and has not tired of writing this story. Several months have passed without publishing new chapters, and earlier, wrote and published very quickly.
I'm really intrigued to know as much as the story goes, as the author, in case something happened.
I give 5, but with repairs for not more chapters.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
Forgiveness
Is not about forgetting. It is about letting go and moving on. It is about taking back responsibility for one's own life instead of blaming it on others. You don't forget anything but you can move beyond it That's what Mark has not done. He is still allowing his father's actions to control his feelings to some extent. I'd like for the author to take this into consideration for writing another chapter or two. I, too, think this story cycle is unfinished. It's a good one so I'd like to see it finished.
Thanks,
Don K.
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