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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve04/13/04

one suggestion

Cock like a horses but
Thick as a tree

You may want to consider moving "but" down to the beginning of the next line. At first, I thought you misspelled "but" and had meant to say horse's butt. Besides, it's best not to end a line with a conjunction.

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by YDD04/13/04

Long dong Silver

Well, you've got the form,
but so did he.

Either "butt"
or move your but
like she said.

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