All Comments on 'Naked, Alive'

is no feeling like that " connection' and you've captured it to a "T"

thank you

Usually intermittent rhyming doesn't work and trips up the word flow.

Here you have managed to avoid the tongue stumbles with an added soupcon of alliteration.

I enjoy your tense writing but would prefer more than just a mere taste.

This poem gives the reader the barest sketch and allows a vivid picture to appear. Well worth more than 5.

Your words made me think of someone I have wanted for a long time and there has never been enough time. Your words made me smile and my heart ache, but in a wonderful way. Your poem was quite lovely.

Loved it, particularly the last line that conveys the sense of wonder so perfectly.