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amazing
how complicated that simple act can be.
and what goes through the mind.
I like this alot
the mind does one thing while the body does another.
very nice
thank you
Feeding on sweet dreams
Quite unusual,
definitely not your normal poem.
More like a well written scene in an erotic story.
Are you going to expand it?
Extremely unusual...
But then thats what makes poetry interesting in the first place. But there is a raw sensuality about this that I liked. Enjoyed...
I remain, Thesandman
evocative
just on the edge of explicit, causing the reader to fill in the blanks - very well done
Wow
Loved this. I feel like you plucked the thoughts from my mind and wrapped them in wonderful words like a gift to me. Thank you!
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