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"like a thorn through silk"
love that.
Some great writing and great images here.
a wonderful look at duality and our dual nature.
another glimpse of your soul
: )
Thank you
some pain
is hard to let go...and duel reminders pull us into each void by the energy of perception...great expression...and feeling ...thanx/bluerain
Violence becomes you
The double entendre in the first line left me expecting more.
Instead the poem turns into a hard little piece
about a little piece hardened (to double the entendre)
to survive as she must
just
split into two
wondering
which one
is who?
Duality worth pondering.
powerful
I think this is quite powerful, with some very strong phrases.
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One of those women,
You know the type,
That always appear to be on the brink of exploding.
joypain
There is a type of pleasure that is painful ~ sexual gratification - joypain.
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