this story works really well... except that it involves Muslims... nothing inherently wrong with Muslims being featured as characters, excepting for the fact that in accordance with their culture, there's a pretty good chance the daughter gets a beating from both of her parents for her "shameful" behavior and the wife would be subject to stoning for her infidelity... and JJ should run for the airport and hope the locals aren't after the infidel for his contribution to the woman's infidelity... this story is an insult to a people and culture that still has a pretty tight grip on its norms and morals...
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Great Story
Mag58 - fantastic story - again. Brilliant sex and superb descriptions.
Keep writing.
Your photo is also superb - you are a very sexy lady
Nice....
Chapter 2 would be good....
not even
this story works really well... except that it involves Muslims... nothing inherently wrong with Muslims being featured as characters, excepting for the fact that in accordance with their culture, there's a pretty good chance the daughter gets a beating from both of her parents for her "shameful" behavior and the wife would be subject to stoning for her infidelity... and JJ should run for the airport and hope the locals aren't after the infidel for his contribution to the woman's infidelity... this story is an insult to a people and culture that still has a pretty tight grip on its norms and morals...
Nice story!
I enjoyed reading this, but I would want to read more about the Pakistani daddy!
Would there be another story on him? ;)
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