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by ReiDeBastos07/14/16

"masseuse"?

I think that you might have meant "masseur" (a massager who is MALE), although the rather blurred distinction between male and female in your story's world would lend itself to either, I guess.

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by nixnixxie07/16/16

Big thanks to ReiDeBastos - a masseuse is generally female, and a masseur is generally male.

I'll be making the edit as soon as I figure out how to do so

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