That's a good start to a great story. I hope you will finish. Many times,I start reading these novels, and they stop, leaving the reader in wonder, as to how it ends. Course, I'm looking for more tortureous feelings, groans, cries,etc., but this is a good start.
Good beginning
That's a good start to a great story. I hope you will finish. Many times,I start reading these novels, and they stop, leaving the reader in wonder, as to how it ends. Course, I'm looking for more tortureous feelings, groans, cries,etc., but this is a good start.
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